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Post by frostblade62 on Oct 30, 2010 23:56:42 GMT -5
IN FOR REPAIR
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Post by hipho on Nov 1, 2010 21:08:34 GMT -5
Meh, just a friendly idea/suggestion but....maybe you should concentrate on fleshing out your other 2 characters instead of making new ones.
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Post by hipho on Nov 11, 2010 10:56:31 GMT -5
Ok Frost, since you asked me to check out this character I'll check it out.....Ok checked it out. You need more in the biography, it's hard to tell somebodies life in a small paragraph. Put a couple events that happened to him growing up, use more descriptive words, ect. ect. Until then....
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Post by frostblade62 on Nov 11, 2010 14:39:55 GMT -5
its WIP, of course i'm going to do all that. I Just wanted to see if you would accept so i can use him now.
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Post by hipho on Nov 14, 2010 15:53:02 GMT -5
No Frost, I won't approve him until he's finished. So either finish him or don't do the RP. Here's a tip: Don't start or plan an RP that will involve an unapproved character
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Post by frostblade62 on Feb 3, 2011 12:52:40 GMT -5
can someone delete this, please?
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